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Hi <phv><FIRST NAME><phv>,

I’m the founder of <phv><Pied Piper><phv> and noticed <phv><Sequoia><phv> recently backed two enterprise software startups: <phv><Example #1><phv> and <phv><Example #2><phv>. We’re a enterprise software ourselves so I wanted to see if you’d be interested in backing us.

To give you some background, <phv><Pied Piper><phv> offers an enterprise compression algorithm that drastically reduces server costs for companies like Amazon, Microsoft, and Google. We've already signed up 20 customers and received an LOI from Facebook. It’s only been a few months since our launch and we’re now looking to scale sales and marketing to accelerate growth.

Are you interested in learning more?

Cheers,
<phv><Richard><phv>